my opening story

[Glorat]

((although i havnt received a reply email yet ive decided to build on a story.
i plan on being an elf mage for a start. my role is hopefully as a trong mage that everyone knows, and tends to pop in and appear when you most need it.
my main attributes should be: being wise (really really old know it all thing) and being helpful;mysterious (eg if i see someone in the middle of a fight with a massive unbeatable monster i run over and cast something
really cool and sparkly, then i dissappear without a trace)
this charachter really really likes big conventions and parties. this charachter hates lvling up for hours on end.
the story behind him goes:))

In an old time at Illarion, existed a wise old mage, by the name of Glorat. Nobody knows where he came from, or who he really is. But when one party of adventurers fled to their dwellings in their hometown, Domaria, they would never feel the same about life again.
At the fourth rising of the moon in the year, was the first day he was sighted, near caves of Firetop, where the young adventurers were battling a massive dragon in hope of stopping the plague that spread over Domaria. Every year the dragon Koth would fly over the town, and demanded many riches, or he would torch a family of peasants. One by one, each family was slowly burnt away, and the village struggled to keep up. Eventually five brave warriors stood up to the dragon, and devised a trap for him at the village. They prepared a catapult, which would hurl stones at the dragon when he came.
when Koth finally came back, they immediately flinged massive boulders at the dragon. Much to their demised Koth simply swiped his tail at the boulders, back into the granary stores of the village. He then shouted
"HOW DARE YOU ATTACK ME! DO YOU THINK YOU CAN RESIST THE POWER OF KOTH!"
Koth flew down, and blew the biggest, most fiery breath the village had seen, and it completely enveloped the poor adventurers. As the smoke cleared, they thought all was lost, and the peasants weeped. But lo and behold, like a bolt from the blue, a mighty elven mage stood strong in front of the blastand cast a magical shield around them. the fire glared off the shield and fizzled slowly. He then hel d his hands in the air, and a magical ball stood above his head. He hurled it at the dragon, which exploded in a bright flash. Koth screamed in terror and parts of his body began to slowly dissolve away until he was no more.
The adventurers cried out
"What is your name mighty sorceror?"
He replied
"It is Glorat, and it is of little importance. I hope you have learnt something today."
A mightly flash appeared, and temporarliy blinded the peopel around him. Several seconds later, as their vision cleared, he was gone, without a trace.
Over the next thousand years he was seen time and time again, and few people got to know him well. As the time goes on, he appears more often, until the day when he finally shows himself indefinetly in public.
Today is that day.

((You mean double parenthesis like these?))
((how was the story anyways?))

[Gro'bul]

although i havnt received a reply email yet ive decided to build on a story.
i plan on being an elf mage for a start. my role is hopefully as a trong mage that everyone knows, and tends to pop in and appear when you most need it.
my main attributes should be: being wise (really really old know it all thing) and being helpful;mysterious (eg if i see someone in the middle of a fight with a massive unbeatable monster i run over and cast something
really cool and sparkly, then i dissappear without a trace)
this charachter really really likes big conventions and parties. this charachter hates lvling up for hours on end.
the story behind him goes:

((this should be in double parenthises, characters don't know about email, the writing of the story ect. double parenthises shows you are talking ooc, out of character.))

[Glorat]

Aha! a fellow wanderer come to hear my story? that was the tale of my life. i hope to make a proud citzen of Illarion.
And who might be you brave adventurer?

((food for thought: this board seems to be full of trade requests. i thought it was for roleplay, not selling potions.))