A little story.

[Levorian Darkheart]

A little story

Iam going to write a little story please give me your critics aswell as your tips.


Everything was quiet, everything was calm...death hath sorounded us and the smell of rotten flesh had been presented to us..that is the story of my town.

"I am sorry" Cassandra said with a whisper.

"As am I my Cassandra"

"But, Levorian"

"Yes?"

"Did not the royal gaurds help"

"Wich, they were all dead..." I answerd with a voice full with sarrow.

"Are you the only survivor"

I noded silently and went to stand by the camp fire.

"But, but what are you going to do?"

"Dont know, it was years ago" I replied with a calm voice, but inside I was screaming from the top of my lungs.

"Who did this?" Cassandra asked as if she was a curios little girl.

"The Bloodrock clan" i replied with a broken voice.
she had now noticed that I was felling akward about our conversation.

"Good night, Levorian"

"Good night, me lady"

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"WAKE UP!" Cassandra shouted hysterical.

"What?!" i replied half asleep half woken.

"It's are gone!"

"Ummm..what is gone?"

"My hair pin"

"So?"

"SO?! It was given to me by my mother as a child.." she sobed.

"Ohh, well guess ill find it for you"

I grabbed my sword and went of into the nearby town.
I saw a few men standing in a corner watching something one of them had in his hand.

"Excuse me"

"Yes" he said grinning at me.

"Give me the pin"

"Why would I do that"

"Or my sword will have a meeting with your arse." I said as bold as i could.

"Hmm, do i have this right you are challanging me?"

"I just want the pin, after all you stole it from me."

"You have a girlys hair pin?"

"Yes, suppose if iam. Now hand it over!"

"Let me think about. No i'll think ill keep it"
The men in the corner started laughing and walked closer to me,
I realized i had no chance, I was doomed.

"HALT!" A voice said.

When they heard the voice they stoped and stared at the source of it, their faces turned pale as if they had seen a ghost.

"Lord Malcolm" the man i spoke to said.

"Give him what you stole"

"Y-y-yes sir" he said with a voice that sounded as if its bearer was a small child.

I recived the hair pin and turned to my savior to thank him, when i suddenly i recongnized him, he was the Kapten of a Group called Bloodrock elite warriors.

without saying a word to him set of in a high pace out of townback to Cassandra to tell her what I had seen.
When I arrived to the camp, Cassandra was no where to be seen.

"Cassandra!!"I shouted.

No reply.

"CASSANDRA!!!" I Roared from the top of my lungs.

"What are you screaming for?!" Cassandra said.

I could feel how i was upset but, at the same time reliefed.

"where were you?!" I asked her roughly.

"Was taking a bath." She replied.

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A few moments later I said we had to leave at once.
so we set out course west of here.





MORE WILL COME, IF YOU LIKED MY WRITING, IF NOT ILL STOP NOW.