We have a number of screenshots on the front page, some of them have grammatically incorrect names, others in my opinion give a bad impression of the game, or look ugly.
"The deads protect the way" should be "The dead protect the way"
"The Power of Magic" looks ugly in my opinion, all there is is a large amount of fire and a mage.
"The Mages can fight too" gives a 'bad' impression about the game. All its showing is a mage attacking a bee with a fireball. It doesn't show how 'powerful' magic is.
"In the l...dragon's den" should be "In the dragons den"
"...end of the work" I would remove, it doesn't promote the game image much in my opinion.
"When the cat is away" should be "While the cat's away"
Discuss.
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Re: Screenshots
Check.Hadrian_Abela wrote:"The deads protect the way" should be "The dead protect the way"
Ugly is relative. It works...Hadrian_Abela wrote:"The Power of Magic" looks ugly in my opinion, all there is is a large amount of fire and a mage.
What 'bad' impression? That a mage can attack a enemy with a fireball. I can't see anything bad at this.Hadrian_Abela wrote:"The Mages can fight too" gives a 'bad' impression about the game. All its showing is a mage attacking a bee with a fireball. It doesn't show how 'powerful' magic is.
A joke regarding the common phrase "In the lion's den"Hadrian_Abela wrote:"In the l...dragon's den" should be "In the dragons den"
I fail to see whats wrong with this picture.Hadrian_Abela wrote:"...end of the work" I would remove, it doesn't promote the game image much in my opinion.
check.Hadrian_Abela wrote:"When the cat is away" should be "While the cat's away"
DoneHadrian_Abela wrote:Discuss.
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Re: Screenshots
Change it to "In the lio...dragin's den" would make the joke more clearlyNitram wrote:
A joke regarding the common phrase "In the lion's den"Hadrian_Abela wrote:"In the l...dragon's den" should be "In the dragons den"
DitoNitram wrote:DoneHadrian_Abela wrote:Discuss.