Site : http://scorpius.spaceports.com/~hanniba ... index.html
I've spen a week trying to make a website that works with the feelinf og illarion.it has a history section to give my guild a feeling of worth and rules are set that i hope don't back any game rules. I've tryed to make an evil giuld that has honor and follow the rule of illarion. Could you look at is bror and give me and tips?
About my site - DOse it fit in with illarion
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Sir crystal star
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- Joined: Fri Dec 07, 2001 8:10 pm
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About my site
suggestions:
- possibility to turn off sound (I like the sound, but I listen to mp3s while I surf the most time)
- check spelling and grammar (yourself if you are a native english speaker, or get a native speaker)
- The disclaimer "First proper Illarion RPG guild site" sounds like showing-off and will annoy more people than it will please
- add some mystic stuff as an exam for the ranks. Not just: Spell A 40%. Perhaps a mage of at least 2 ranks above you will ask you some questions about the source of magic, the meaning of the symbols... and will supervise the newbie for a while, so he can tell if he's "worthy of beeing a 3rd Rank Mage". Perhaps every new member will get a higher ranked member to teach him and adventure with him through the lands. The higher ranked will announce him for the examination to the guild chief (this system will require many members).
This way it won't be just a "I-shoot-4-spells-exam", but more part of a big ritual that can perhaps be held once a week and is ended by a celebration....... Maybe I have taken this a little far
I like the page design, graphics and the story section.
- possibility to turn off sound (I like the sound, but I listen to mp3s while I surf the most time)
- check spelling and grammar (yourself if you are a native english speaker, or get a native speaker)
- The disclaimer "First proper Illarion RPG guild site" sounds like showing-off and will annoy more people than it will please
- add some mystic stuff as an exam for the ranks. Not just: Spell A 40%. Perhaps a mage of at least 2 ranks above you will ask you some questions about the source of magic, the meaning of the symbols... and will supervise the newbie for a while, so he can tell if he's "worthy of beeing a 3rd Rank Mage". Perhaps every new member will get a higher ranked member to teach him and adventure with him through the lands. The higher ranked will announce him for the examination to the guild chief (this system will require many members).
This way it won't be just a "I-shoot-4-spells-exam", but more part of a big ritual that can perhaps be held once a week and is ended by a celebration....... Maybe I have taken this a little far
I like the page design, graphics and the story section.
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Sir crystal star
- Posts: 165
- Joined: Fri Dec 07, 2001 8:10 pm
- Location: UK
- Contact:
About my site
First, thank you
i know i have to get people to check my grammer, but i can only get some one to help no and again. it will improve.
I've thought about the ranking system you've taked about and an example of it can be found
in the perent directory of the site given. I use that system, but with only 5 members - i don't think it will work.
i know i have to get people to check my grammer, but i can only get some one to help no and again. it will improve.
I've thought about the ranking system you've taked about and an example of it can be found
in the perent directory of the site given. I use that system, but with only 5 members - i don't think it will work.
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Sir crystal star
- Posts: 165
- Joined: Fri Dec 07, 2001 8:10 pm
- Location: UK
- Contact:
About my site
P.s
Page will be updated in a while,2 weeks or so. just started my new business!!!
Page will be updated in a while,2 weeks or so. just started my new business!!!