family trouble - my mother has died long ago

Sir Dart · Post by **Sir Dart** » Thu May 23, 2002 10:33 am

my mother has died so long so long ago I can't remember the beatiful smile she
had she was more than I friend to me but was my best friend for I have been
abandon from her everlasting kisses which I should not have no more for my
heart has been torned for she left so long ago no one or nothing shall ever take
her place for she has been cast long ago died long ago left me long ago for my
skin is getting old how can this be I am so young for she has left me for she
will never return to me I can no longer have her kisses I can not have her hugs
that were so gentle my heart will be torned for ever more

Damien · Post by **Damien** » Thu May 23, 2002 11:01 am

((ooc:

ARGH !!!
Write in sentences !
Write understandeable !

/ooc))

Erdrick · Post by **Erdrick** » Fri May 24, 2002 2:44 am

Holy moly, there wasn't a single comma, period, apostrophe or anything in there!
Not even a single capitalization!
Geez, Dart, you are quite the IQ champion, right up there with the bag of coal I brought home a few days ago...

Korwin · Post by **Korwin** » Fri May 24, 2002 3:43 am

i am confused for there are no periods in this sentance and for there are no commas and this causes me to be very very confused for i do not like a total lack of punctuation for it causes confusion for it irritates me and many others and they can never be the same after they read this twisted piece of literature

I think I have captured the essence of the writer in my own sentance

Caenolath · Post by **Caenolath** » Fri May 24, 2002 3:43 am

Erdrick, SFKTIO (Society for Kindness to Inanimate Objects) will be very angry that you said a bag of coal has the same IQ as Sir Dart!