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[zombie master]

I have made story so all can know who I am and how I was formed and it will be
be a little long as you may see when you read you will see how I met turf and
how I was helped by duurk to become alive to this world once more live on


zombie master: hmm,I shall bring you all death

knight: please don't hurt me I did nothing to you

zombie master: shut up before I kill you slowly

knight: please at least you can tell me your name

zombie master: my name is none of your concern

knight: its my concern if you going to kill me

(zombie master begins laughing)

knight: does this all pleasure you killing everyone

zombie master: I grow sick of talking to you

zombie master: prepare to die

knight: why you want to kill me

zombie master:hmm, knight I have heard enough you die now

(turf walks in and looks at the knight who is crying)

turf:hm, why do you draw tears young trusted knight

zombie master: be gone with you dwarf before you suffer the same faith

turf: what faith?

knight: run dwarf he is insane and he is going to kill me

turf: well thats no good your badly injured

knight: Don't worry about me just get out of here

zombie master: you better listen to him dwarf and run for you have the chance

turf: No, I am not scared of you orc  now leave the knight alone

zombie master: you have no idea who you are denfying here

turf: your no one special just a beast with no feelings

zombie master: now you die along with this orc

zombie master: you first orc now you better have your last sayings now

turf: orc you are nothing and typically I don't care who you think you are

zombie master: you dare insult me and deny me

turf: yes I do what you going to do about it

knight: don't try to fight him its impossible to physically hurt him

turf: it is

knight: yes use magic if you have any

zombie master: dwarf you have died over nothing I gave you a chance to escape

(turf: pulls out his wand along with mana 1 potion)

turf: LETS FIGHT!!!

zombie master: idot dwarf

(turf: begins casting magic on zombie master)

turf: it has no effect how is that possible I am the strongest magician in my town

zombie master: I have lord moshran blood in my veins

turf: lord moshran?

zombie master: you know nothing of him you are just a weak dwarf

turf: I have not given up yet

zombie master: you still are defying me

(turf: cast his strongest most trusted spell hept kel)

zombie master: now its my turn

(zombie master: cast a hidden spell which is forbidden by gods)

(turf: jumps out of the way just as the spell about hit him)

(turf: pulls out his firesword and put on his knight shield)

knight: nooo don't attack him it won't do you any good

(turf: runs up and use a few of his furies attacks)

zombie master: you are really dumb dwarf it not worth to killing you

knight: run dwarf

turf: the name is turf

zombie master: I dont care who you are

turf: who are you orc

zombie master: the name is zombie master

turf: zombie master your not a zombie

zombie master: I control zombies and I have the ability of necromancy

turf: necromancy?

zombie master: I have the ability to control the dead

knight: turf can you tell my wife emily I love her she is in the town of illarion

turf: what is your name knight

knight: my name is sir canon

sir canon: leader of the gray wolf pack

turf: well sir canon don't worry your not going to die

sir canon: your not strong enough to fight him

turf: I shall figure something out

zombie master: you are both idots and your not worth killing

(zombie master: raises the dead of skeletons and zombies)

(and turf and sir canon were easily out numbered)

(the zombie master turns into a a black cloud and dissappeared)

turf: we are going to have to make a run for it

sir canon: that would be the idea if I could run

turf: its ok I will heal you

(turf cast a mes pen spell)

sir canon: thanks we better get out of here

turf: yes we should

(turf and sir canon begen running out of the dark forest)

turf: tell me what is a fine man like you doing in the dark forest

sir canon: I was going to ask you the same thing

turf: well I am here to pick toadstoal for dinner

sir canon: I was here fighting the zombie master

turf: how did you manage to run into a guy like that he is very strong

sir canon: he is lord moshran general of the army of darkness

turf: army of darkness?

sir canon: its along story

turf: well how did you manage to get in a fight with him

turf: if you knew he was a general

sir canon: I was planing on sealing him in this ring

turf: what ring?

sir canon: this ring of edvil spirits

turf: hmm how were you going to do that

sir canon: well I was going to try to get him weak

turf: and how my I ask you were going to do that

sir canon: he is a half human

turf: so he can bleed

sir canon: yes but it is very hard to do nearly impossible

turf: exactly who is he

sir canon: he was just a edvil man and he loved to kill and spread violence

turf: that bad heen then I shall send him away

turf: exactly how do I do that

sir canon: you have to fight him long enough to weaken him

sir canon: you will know when he is weak because he will heal himself

turf: ok

sir canon: and he will constanely do it

turf: were can i found him

sir canon: in the forest

turf: he is still in there

sir canon: he went to get sleep to heal him self and regenerate his powers

turf: were exactly is he sleeping

sir canon: on top of that canyon up there

(turf looks up at the canyon and is amazed)

sir canon: you have until the next night to kill him

turf: ok I will do it

sir canon: take this ring and meet me up there tonight

turf: ok

sir canon: cya tonignt

turf: ok

(nightfall begins to fall slowly)

sir canon: are you ready turf

turf: yes

(turf and sir canon begins to walk into the zombie master lair)

zombie master: its you two again come here to eagerly die

turf: I am afraid its you who will be dieing

zombie master: death two you both

(turf and zombie master begin battling with magic)

sir canon: ok turf its all up to you you have to get him weak

turf:hept kel

zombie master: kel jus

turf: ra kel qwan

zombie master: ra kel

turf: hept sij

( the zombie master begins to get weak)

sir canon: thats my part

( sir canon says the magic words shilika shilka send this orc soul away)

zombie master: nooooo

sir canon: its all over

turf: yep that was hard

( the lair begins to shake)

turf: we better get out of here

(sir canon and turf runs out of the lair and sir canon gets stuck under a rock)

sir canon: says run forget about me

turf: im not leaving without you

sir canon: i said go

turf: ok

(turf leaves the lair and thinks sir canons dead but he is not)

This is the end of my story

[Erdrick]

That was the most moronic longest story I have ever seen, with no periods, with no plot, with a stupid storyline and the words made no sense:
"you are both denfying me. you don't deserve to die"
Then he proceeds to kill them?
Please don't torture us with a chapter 2.

[Korwin]

umm Zombie master, if you want to make a story please make
it a story not a script

[Dyluck]

I must admit....reading this was rather....amusing

[Lloyd]

he took my idea completly, here is a story for you
lloyd meets zombie moron in a dark ally, llyod cuts zombie moron into little pieces, lloyd give Andrew Horton little pieces to make a stew, lloyd takes the stew and feeds it to the deamons.

[Rhiko]

Intersting,i believe you might be related or have soemthing to do with turf because why would a zombie master,king of evil want people to know of his demise; write his death story
.And anyway,i am no dark mage but iknow who moshran is and well somone who has his blood don't die that easy

[Emhyr van Emreis]

Well, I dunno... I can't find a plot in there, it is badly written... And who are you to say that Moshran's blood flows through your veins? You rather sound like a weak servant of Cherass who wants to come to his power. For you need to know that the only servants of Moshran who have his power in them are Dragorog, Bjolmur and Chetass.

ooc: Sorry, guy. I like evil and original character stories, they add spice to Illarion. But I hate it when somebody comes and says "Wow I'm sooo powerful, way more powerful than everybody, I directly serve the gods and have their protection etc. etc. etc.", as this rather sounds like somebody who hasn't got the hang of this game yet.
You know, I very seriously doubt that there is any player on this world powerful enough to conjure skeletons.
Think up a better story, and you will be a real enrichment to this world. Stick with this one, and you won't differ much from every guy who wants to be something special without any work.
No offence meant, but think seriously about this.