In need of help.

Celyme · Post by **Celyme** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:15 am

Someone Instant message me at Bikerx105 if your willing to create a charcter bio for me. Apparently im not that great at being descriptive.

Celyme · Post by **Celyme** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:17 am

Thats screen name is a AIM screen name, not MSN

Celyme · Post by **Celyme** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:25 am

or at least help with one. i would really like to play this game

Delakaniam · Post by **Delakaniam** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:43 am

First off, a) There's this little button in the upper left hand corner of every one of your posts that is labeled "edit." Typically around here, people appreciate it more if you use that instead of posting several times in a row. Just a helpful tip.

Second... can you elaborate on what you mean by needing help with a character bio?

Celyme · Post by **Celyme** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:47 am

sorry about the multi posting thing, my bad.

Well, i was reading somthing and i guess the character bio has nothign to do with being accepted to the game. But the other thing im having trouble with is the acceptance story. I made up one, that i thought was pretty good, but apparently it wasnt.

Delakaniam · Post by **Delakaniam** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 3:54 am

Just put your best into the acceptance story, it's used simply to judge your ability to roleplay, and spontaneously. That's the important thing here. So just write what you would and don't worry any more about it, because there's nothing else you can really do. Besides wait. Oh yes, the waiting.

Celyme · Post by **Celyme** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 4:03 am

last time i only had to wait a total of 12 hrs to get the story and then for them to not accept me

Sam · Post by **Sam** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 4:22 am

Do some research here :

http://www.moonsilver.de/english/main_e.htm

Get a feel for the environment and the different races. Then write your story. Good luck.

Post by **Estralis Seborian** » Sat Nov 27, 2004 11:04 am

Some spoilers now how you can write a good story:

Be creative but stay realistic
Use proper spelling and grammar
Avoid modern words like "hi" or abbreviations like "r u" "lol"
Write more then just one or two lines
Try to have the backgrounds given on moonsilver.de in mind

If you need help in writing a character background, I´ve found this guide:

http://karindoug.keenspace.com/20qs-secret.html

Celyme · Post by **Celyme** » Sun Nov 28, 2004 4:30 am

If anyone has the time, could they rate my submission story for me? i just want to know if is junk or not.. send me a IM at bmx4life6567 (thats aol)

Nikago Fyrstyn · Post by **Nikago Fyrstyn** » Sun Nov 28, 2004 4:37 am

EDIT IT FAST!!!
Take it out immideatly out out ..away with that its forbidden ,just edit it all away posting such things here isn't allowed ,cause other's could copy it.

Celyme · Post by **Celyme** » Sun Nov 28, 2004 5:57 am

woops i dnt know that

Kaja Wolfagen · Post by **Kaja Wolfagen** » Sun Nov 28, 2004 1:32 pm

Post it to me via private message and ill have a read through when i get the chance,, dont expect any corrections but ill gladly give some advice.