A small figure

[Olo Toadfoot]

A small figure deep in the shadows of a large ship hears the creaking of the timbers and the pounding of the waves as the storm hits the ship he has stowawayed on. He sneaks closer to the hatch that leads above deck just as a wave crashes and makes him fall off his feet. He grabs ahold of the railing and slowly stands and begins to make his way topside to see what is afoot. Upon making it to the hatch the small figure slowly opens the trap door gripping his fingers tightly around it as to not fall back down. As the hatch opens he hears the shouting of men that are yelling "REEF REEF" the captian orders all men to abandon ship just as the ship start to crack on the reef. The small figure is hurled out of the hatch and lands squarely on deck. As the ship starts to splinter he is hurled by the large surf into the water. Not know how to swim the small figure grabs on to whatever he can which is a large barrel used to store things with. He grasps the barrel and holds on with all his might. The storm tosses him back and forth like a doll but he still holds onto the barrel. His hands are cut and the salt water washes the wounds causing pain to shoot up his arms but he still holds on. As the storm weakens the small figure climps into the barrel and once the storm is gone he falls asleep exhausted.


((more will come when I can play my account))


((Oh if you want to post feel free but nuttin bout my character being met yet cause Im not ingame Thanks))

[Jeth Krindow]

((Good story and storyline but I just felt some of the sentences were weak and some were sentence fragments. Good read.))