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Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 5:39 am
by Nanuk
Hi everyone:
it has taken quite some time and it was definitely overdue, but now it is done. We have updated the Page
Moonsilver. It became less complex as we now direct our effort to the most important parts. It is intended to offer both a German and an English version (thanks to Cosma and her friends), but at the moment I haven't included all of the German texts. Please be a little more patient. This is my prime focus at the moment.
I would also like to direct your attention to the races. Except the humans and the dwarfs they now have a general background. Damien was busily working on them. Both of the missing races will follow soon.
Nanuk
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Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 7:31 am
by Gurok
This is great, all the history is amazing, although your exact translations need a bit of work. It is easy to grasp your meaning, but I think a native english speaker may be better suited to translatind what you said, in english, into proper english. I do not suggest myself, but maybe the GM who supposedly has a native language of english. If they are not available you can email myslef or I presume Quain, and we are more than willing to help you. Sorry Quain if your not, but im sure you are!
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Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 7:33 am
by Dyluck
Care to make a wager with me that it's not Quain? $ :biggrin: $
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Posted: Thu Apr 04, 2002 1:46 pm
by Erdrick
It's not Quain, it's Rubion Lorcaia.
I can translate it for you, just tell me so. So, it will make perfect sense.
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Posted: Fri Apr 05, 2002 12:53 pm
by Nanuk
@Gurok and Erdrick
The problem with the English is that there is no native speaker in the story team. Therefore I would definitly be happy, if I could send you some of the content to re-phrase it into better English.
Tomorrow I will send some of the texts to both of you. Is the email address in your profile correct, or should I send it to some other address?
Nanuk
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Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 3:48 am
by Erdrick
It's the right one, I'll revise the text and send it back to you.
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Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 3:51 am
by Astral
I could also do a bit of this editing, I am pretty good with fixing up grammar stuff. I have had quite a bit of experience (At least with chinese-like grammar).
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Posted: Sat Apr 06, 2002 4:47 am
by Roke
((HEY ASTRAL!!! I have more experience than youwith bad grammer in English, well maybe not bad grammer but poor grammer!!!! Who sits beside him in classes????)) Sorry about that, I am sure the new page will be great and if you need help I will.
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Posted: Sun Apr 07, 2002 4:23 pm
by Erdrick
Did you send the mail?