Description/spelling/gramar improvements
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Description/spelling/gramar improvements
General topic for all description/spelling/grammar improvements.
First suggested improvement:
In Raban's quest, the second task, he asks you to get him 20 blackberries. In the quest description is says that these can be gathered with a sickle from a hedge in the forest. However, trying this will result in a warning text, no fruits are collected (see image). Blackberries can be collected from blackberry bushes, not hedges, and it is not necessary to hold a sickle to collect them. My suggestion would be to change the description to something like:
"Find twenty blackberries and bring them back to Raban. You can collect blackberries from blackberry bushes in the forest."
First suggested improvement:
In Raban's quest, the second task, he asks you to get him 20 blackberries. In the quest description is says that these can be gathered with a sickle from a hedge in the forest. However, trying this will result in a warning text, no fruits are collected (see image). Blackberries can be collected from blackberry bushes, not hedges, and it is not necessary to hold a sickle to collect them. My suggestion would be to change the description to something like:
"Find twenty blackberries and bring them back to Raban. You can collect blackberries from blackberry bushes in the forest."
- Estralis Seborian
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Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Fixed on devserver.
Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
In Brigette Russ' cave (the one used in her quest) on the second level there is a small altar with gloves on it.
The gloves have an examine text, however the word "Something" is spelled as "somethingn"
The gloves have an examine text, however the word "Something" is spelled as "somethingn"
Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
("ment" should be "meant")
Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Pull request in for fixes #123 on Content and #35 on map
Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Should it be besmirched? I'm not certain
- Gibble Thibblebum
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Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Quest text is wrong or old for one of the steps in the "A Question of Honour", it asks you to get 20 bricks but it tells you to use a mold in the glass melting oven to make bricks when it should be tongs in the kiln that are used.
- Estralis Seborian
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Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Both implemented, thanks for reporting.
Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Clicking a magic shard gives off the description:
The shard looks like a pice of a...
pice -> piece
The shard looks like a pice of a...
pice -> piece
Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Fixed on dev server
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Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Young trees chopped down "This tree is too you to grow again"
Also no matter if fir tree or not will tell you it won't grow many fruits
Also no matter if fir tree or not will tell you it won't grow many fruits
Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements
Found a description bug
Cynthia plays his panpipes, blowing gently and gracefully, singing an impressively beautiful melody
Should be better with plays the panpipes
Cynthia plays his panpipes, blowing gently and gracefully, singing an impressively beautiful melody
Should be better with plays the panpipes