Sole Judge of Truth
Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2005 10:37 pm
Here is one of my works that I have come across recently.
Cliu pins a long sheet of parchement on to the existing one.:
Reexamination of a Kingdom
Deep with in a desolate valley, lost to the rest of the world, lies a Kingdom. This kingdom, which half is drenched in darkness and the other in light, has stratums which are brought together only to be seen apart. Upon a steep incline lies a mighty castle covered in pristine rays which break through the light fog that floats around the structure. Its windows are always steamed and can hardly see the smaller castle that lies adjacent to it. The petite castle harbors a clandestine council who are said to bask in their pride, a pride which is created by themselves only for their liking. These two castles congregate to discuss the daily matters of styles, food, riches and things of the sort. Supposedly the king will then go up to look out his grand window and try and survey his land. He is said to try his best but only shows shortcomings.
Down below the hill lays the town which can be mistaken for night. It consists of a myriad of characters whose traits are shockingly alike. If one were with only sense of sound then it would be almost impossible to distinguish each citizen. A small ruckus can be heard in the looming darkness but it is mainly between the vicious warriors who are sent from the incline. These warriors strike with but a moments notice. A vicious exposition of brutality can be seen almost everyday. You would find it very odd that many of these citizens agree with them. These unwise folk walk around with hilts in there palms and swords at their throats. It is amazing that only a few enlightened exist among these thousand. These wise men often speak of a shining star which glimmers in their sky. It can be seen night and day and is often referred to as a savior. Dreams of one day this land becoming paradise are blatantly useless…that is until the start touches the ground. If this legend does come true it would be an amazing sight.
Although these characters seem atrocious, the worst of them are the mud dwellers. These vile creatures lurk in the deep underbelly of the society. They murder innocent people everyday.They are even more senseless and brutal than the warriors. It is easy to understand these foul beasts but alas the king is shrouded in his own blessings and fails to realize the damage that will be down. This town is said to be in desperate need of aid, but lack of sense stops this from coming true. I have been to this kingdom only once in my life and only few stars shine as bright as “the savior”. I pray for its redemption every day.
the writing ends and a new form begins
I decide to post it for the public domain. Hope you enjoy.
Cliu pins a long sheet of parchement on to the existing one.:
Reexamination of a Kingdom
Deep with in a desolate valley, lost to the rest of the world, lies a Kingdom. This kingdom, which half is drenched in darkness and the other in light, has stratums which are brought together only to be seen apart. Upon a steep incline lies a mighty castle covered in pristine rays which break through the light fog that floats around the structure. Its windows are always steamed and can hardly see the smaller castle that lies adjacent to it. The petite castle harbors a clandestine council who are said to bask in their pride, a pride which is created by themselves only for their liking. These two castles congregate to discuss the daily matters of styles, food, riches and things of the sort. Supposedly the king will then go up to look out his grand window and try and survey his land. He is said to try his best but only shows shortcomings.
Down below the hill lays the town which can be mistaken for night. It consists of a myriad of characters whose traits are shockingly alike. If one were with only sense of sound then it would be almost impossible to distinguish each citizen. A small ruckus can be heard in the looming darkness but it is mainly between the vicious warriors who are sent from the incline. These warriors strike with but a moments notice. A vicious exposition of brutality can be seen almost everyday. You would find it very odd that many of these citizens agree with them. These unwise folk walk around with hilts in there palms and swords at their throats. It is amazing that only a few enlightened exist among these thousand. These wise men often speak of a shining star which glimmers in their sky. It can be seen night and day and is often referred to as a savior. Dreams of one day this land becoming paradise are blatantly useless…that is until the start touches the ground. If this legend does come true it would be an amazing sight.
Although these characters seem atrocious, the worst of them are the mud dwellers. These vile creatures lurk in the deep underbelly of the society. They murder innocent people everyday.They are even more senseless and brutal than the warriors. It is easy to understand these foul beasts but alas the king is shrouded in his own blessings and fails to realize the damage that will be down. This town is said to be in desperate need of aid, but lack of sense stops this from coming true. I have been to this kingdom only once in my life and only few stars shine as bright as “the savior”. I pray for its redemption every day.
the writing ends and a new form begins
I decide to post it for the public domain. Hope you enjoy.