Bargen Masters

Elaralith · Post by **Elaralith** » Wed Apr 09, 2003 8:33 am

Not a bad site, but I have some advice for you...try to make the site have more of a fantasy RP atmosphere by replacing messages like "Come through the portal to enter the realm of really cheap prices!" with something like this "A merchant greets you cordially and beckons you to enter, proclaiming that here be the cheapest deals in all illarion!" I hope you see what I mean. Also, one of those annoying geocities ads blocks view from some of the words in home section of the site (even after it is closed)...Again, your on the right track, but you need to get the illarion fantasy atmosphere in to give it that extra shine that separates the common sites from the excellent ones.

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Wed Apr 09, 2003 11:12 pm

ok, ill get that fixed soon

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Thu Apr 10, 2003 12:08 am

OK, i think that should do it. I expect you all to tell me what you think now

paul laffing · Post by **paul laffing** » Thu Apr 10, 2003 2:44 am

Uhhhh... interesting...

Elaralith · Post by **Elaralith** » Thu Apr 10, 2003 3:13 am

I like the torches...but I think the knight and the "magic" are worse than the portal...

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Thu Apr 10, 2003 6:04 am

sighs
so much for creativity. Shot down! like a bolt of ice striking me!
sighs again
ill see what i can come up with. i like the opening page though

Elaralith · Post by **Elaralith** » Fri Apr 11, 2003 3:04 am

Your creativity is not lacking....it is quite humourous...

But the thing is that the knight and the magic just do not fit in with your guild...a merchant guild that it is. Try to think like a merchant...become a merchant...make your imagination let you feel a merchant's thoughts...that is roleplay!

Korwin · Post by **Korwin** » Fri Apr 11, 2003 4:39 am

Almost seems like kidnapping to me, "Come with me, or be burned to death!".

paul laffing · Post by **paul laffing** » Fri Apr 11, 2003 4:58 am

Heh, I think that is the point. "We'll steal give you good deal... or just steal your money!"

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Fri Apr 11, 2003 6:25 am

i woulda done somethign more...merchenty, but i dont have a picture that would fit. ill look though...

Elaralith · Post by **Elaralith** » Fri Apr 11, 2003 11:09 pm

@Korwin I could not have said it better myself...the whole thing gives the impression of a Thieves Guild rather than a respectable merchant's guild.
@Drogla Being a merchant guild...you do not want to be known as cheaters and thieves...again, something along the lines of
"Welcome to the home of the Bargen Masters, where you can find anything you need and have it for the cheapest prices!"
Then a picture of a ?fat? merchant behind a counter smiling would be nice...

paul laffing · Post by **paul laffing** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 3:02 am

hey! What about you saying about the people working here?

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 4:16 am

@elaralith:::get me the piture of a ?fat? eprson behind a counter. as i said, i need to get a more sutable picture first.
@paul:::ill try to think of a more creative way for the opening so i can talk about eh people who work for the Bargen Masters

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 5:16 am

ok, i did something a little more ... merchanty

take a looksy and let me know

paul laffing · Post by **paul laffing** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 3:48 pm

It is a good picture and stuff, just the layout isn't great. I can help you with it, if you want.

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sat Apr 12, 2003 9:19 pm

whats wrong witht he layout? its better then the original layout i think! and i like this layout...
#me wispers to himself "why isnt everyone happy that its better then before? why cant everyone jsut be happy? im so sad people dont like it, im jsut so sad"

paul laffing · Post by **paul laffing** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 12:23 am

Hey drogla! What do you think of this?

http://www.bargenmasters.tk

Cain Freemont · Post by **Cain Freemont** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 12:26 am

Hmm.. not sure what Drogla thinks, but I like it. I think it would draw a fair amount of people into the site.

paul laffing · Post by **paul laffing** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 12:30 am

I just turned off the advertisements. www.dot.tk Is the best for a free domain name. No ads. We'll have to see what Drogla thinks.

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 12:35 am

hmmmmi like the picture adn text, but n o the way Bargen Masters is but on the top...and i thkn i will sign up at www.tk, but you have www.bargenmasters.tk already...

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 1:32 am

ok, new site. http://www.bargenmasters.shorturl.com/

paul laffing · Post by **paul laffing** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 4:22 am

Why don't you just look at the source code from my web? And i can delete the bargenmasters.tk domain name so you can take it. But what did you mean? Mine looks nice!

Oh, one more thing I noticed. Can you change the bottles price to 3 g please?

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 5:30 am

ill change the bottle price, but i already sent an e-mail asking to get the link changed. aside, shorturl.com is jsut as good as tk.com. no pop ups or anything

Kirtar Toadfoot · Post by **Kirtar Toadfoot** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:27 pm

Drogla how much you selling bottles for?

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:30 pm

i am going to increase my prices to 2gold each, but the web site wil say 3gold(website has only a recomendation of prices, not a strick list that shall be followed no matter what)

Kirtar Toadfoot · Post by **Kirtar Toadfoot** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:34 pm

so it is 5 gold for one?

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:36 pm

how did you get five? i sell mine for 2gold...

Kirtar Toadfoot · Post by **Kirtar Toadfoot** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:38 pm

so only 2 gold or 4 gold?

Drogla · Post by **Drogla** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:39 pm

...do you pull random numbers like 5 or 4 for a reason or fun?
third time i am saying::i sell bottles for 2gold
<third person>Drogla sells bottles for 2gold

Nilo · Post by **Nilo** » Sun Apr 13, 2003 9:40 pm

*rolls his eyes* not funny.....drogla, do you have bottles yet?

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Bargen Masters

are smithed goods or carpentered goods more needed?