Description/spelling/gramar improvements

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Description/spelling/gramar improvements

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General topic for all description/spelling/grammar improvements.


First suggested improvement:
In Raban's quest, the second task, he asks you to get him 20 blackberries. In the quest description is says that these can be gathered with a sickle from a hedge in the forest. However, trying this will result in a warning text, no fruits are collected (see image). Blackberries can be collected from blackberry bushes, not hedges, and it is not necessary to hold a sickle to collect them. My suggestion would be to change the description to something like:
"Find twenty blackberries and bring them back to Raban. You can collect blackberries from blackberry bushes in the forest."
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Fixed on devserver.
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In Brigette Russ' cave (the one used in her quest) on the second level there is a small altar with gloves on it.

The gloves have an examine text, however the word "Something" is spelled as "somethingn"
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Image

("ment" should be "meant")
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Pull request in for fixes #123 on Content and #35 on map
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Image

Should it be besmirched? I'm not certain
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Aswe wrote: Wed Oct 16, 2019 11:20 pm Image

Should it be besmirched? I'm not certain
I think it should be besmeared. Nice catch correcting it.
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Quest text is wrong or old for one of the steps in the "A Question of Honour", it asks you to get 20 bricks but it tells you to use a mold in the glass melting oven to make bricks when it should be tongs in the kiln that are used.
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Both implemented, thanks for reporting.
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Clicking a magic shard gives off the description:
The shard looks like a pice of a...

pice -> piece
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Fixed on dev server
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Young trees chopped down "This tree is too you to grow again"


Also no matter if fir tree or not will tell you it won't grow many fruits
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Found a description bug

Cynthia plays his panpipes, blowing gently and gracefully, singing an impressively beautiful melody

Should be better with plays the panpipes
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