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Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2019 12:56 pm
by Emlyn
General topic for all description/spelling/grammar improvements.


First suggested improvement:
In Raban's quest, the second task, he asks you to get him 20 blackberries. In the quest description is says that these can be gathered with a sickle from a hedge in the forest. However, trying this will result in a warning text, no fruits are collected (see image). Blackberries can be collected from blackberry bushes, not hedges, and it is not necessary to hold a sickle to collect them. My suggestion would be to change the description to something like:
"Find twenty blackberries and bring them back to Raban. You can collect blackberries from blackberry bushes in the forest."

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Sat Jan 19, 2019 4:43 pm
by Estralis Seborian
Fixed on devserver.

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2019 9:21 pm
by Aswe
In Brigette Russ' cave (the one used in her quest) on the second level there is a small altar with gloves on it.

The gloves have an examine text, however the word "Something" is spelled as "somethingn"

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Wed Jun 19, 2019 10:09 pm
by Aswe
Image

("ment" should be "meant")

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Sun Jun 23, 2019 11:23 pm
by Evie
Pull request in for fixes #123 on Content and #35 on map

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Wed Oct 16, 2019 11:20 pm
by Aswe
Image

Should it be besmirched? I'm not certain

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Sun Oct 20, 2019 3:57 pm
by Evie
Aswe wrote: Wed Oct 16, 2019 11:20 pm Image

Should it be besmirched? I'm not certain
I think it should be besmeared. Nice catch correcting it.

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2019 11:13 pm
by Gibble Thibblebum
Quest text is wrong or old for one of the steps in the "A Question of Honour", it asks you to get 20 bricks but it tells you to use a mold in the glass melting oven to make bricks when it should be tongs in the kiln that are used.

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Sun Nov 03, 2019 6:19 am
by Estralis Seborian
Both implemented, thanks for reporting.

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Thu Dec 05, 2019 8:58 pm
by Brightrim
Clicking a magic shard gives off the description:
The shard looks like a pice of a...

pice -> piece

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Tue Dec 10, 2019 4:49 pm
by Evie
Fixed on dev server

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Mon Jun 29, 2020 3:58 am
by Achae Eanstray
Young trees chopped down "This tree is too you to grow again"


Also no matter if fir tree or not will tell you it won't grow many fruits

Re: Description/spelling/gramar improvements

Posted: Tue Jun 30, 2020 7:41 pm
by Cynthia
Found a description bug

Cynthia plays his panpipes, blowing gently and gracefully, singing an impressively beautiful melody

Should be better with plays the panpipes